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Post by Feederpark on Feb 12, 2012 20:14:05 GMT
I wanted to make a good exercise to improve my English, so I tried to write the lyrics of this brand new B-side, I'm obviously open to your corrections !
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They're closing up all of the factories Building walls ?? ?? Barricading up the embassy Is this the way things have become
Will we give in, will we burn out? Again I don't know Will we give in, will we give?
They're running down along the avenues Now their chaos has begun We live our lives in a democracy Why should we want our cities burnt?
Will we give in, will we burn out? Again I don't know Will we give in, will we burn out? Will we give in, will we give?
You've fallen to the trap Fallen to the trap, insane trap, clever Never look back, never look back, never look, never let go You've fallen to the trap Fallen to the trap, insane trap, clever
Will we give in, will we burn out? Again I don't know Will we give in, will we burn out? Will we give in, will we burn out? Again I don't know Will we give in, will we give?
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Post by enzofr on Feb 14, 2012 12:41:47 GMT
I wanted to make a good exercise to improve my English, so I tried to write the lyrics of this brand new B-side, I'm obviously open to your corrections ! [you] ------------------[/you] They're closing up all of the factories Building walls ?? ?? Barricading up the embassy Is this the way things have become Will we give in, will we burn out? Again I don't know Will we give in, will we give?They're running down along the avenues Now their chaos has begun We live our lives in a democracy Why should we want our cities burnt? Will we give in, will we burn out? Again I don't know Will we give in, will we burn out? Will we give in, will we give?You've fallen to the trap Fallen to the trap, insane trap, clever Never look back, never look back, never look, never let go You've fallen to the trap Fallen to the trap, insane trap, clever Will we give in, will we burn out? Again I don't know Will we give in, will we burn out? Will we give in, will we burn out? Again I don't know Will we give in, will we give?Hi thank you for searching that lyric, so I tried to improve it : "They're closing up all of the factories Building walls [you]along the front[/you]Barricading up the embassy Is this the way things have become" "You've fallen to the trap Fallen to the trap, insane trap, clever Never look back, never look back, never look, never let go You've fallen to the trap Fallen to the trap, insane trap , clever"
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Post by Stu on Feb 14, 2012 19:18:58 GMT
Good effort! Here are some more corrections:
They're running down along the avenues Now the chaos has begun We live our lives in a democracy Why should we watch our cities burn?
You fall into the trap Fall into the trap, the same trap, clever Never look back, never look back, never look, never let go Fall into the trap Fall into the trap, the same trap
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Post by Sonorous (ex-feedermadness) on Feb 14, 2012 19:24:51 GMT
Definitely agree with Stu's corrections, and thanks for the lines 2 and 3 which I've been struggling to understand for ages!
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